The Moment when,
She was lying on my Chest..
.. Hearing my heart-beat..
I can feel her breath on Me..,
Seeing into her blue eyes..
Curling her smooth hair back her ears..
Holding her velvety body Close to Me..
Deep in her eyes..I saw Love for Me!!!
Holding her tight..
I thought of living this moment forever n ever..
This is the Moment of Love..
n a Moment in Life..that I could never ever want to loose..!!!
hav a Romantic Day..
can write this in present tense.....2nd line *she laid on my chest hearing my heart beat*both together felt better...last line this is the moment of love,life ...which i can never loose
ReplyDeleteyup we can jus remove 'n' in there! :)
ReplyDeleteBut the last line has to be a moment of love..n a moment 'in' life..as der cud be many more such moments to be coming possibly! ;)