The Moment she said, "NO"...
The World around me started spinning..
n I collapsed on to my knees..
..
My heart was Burning..
n My eyes were Raining tears.. :'(
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She emanated me up to Heaven,taking my hand into hers..
But as she left it, leaving My Love behind ..
I'm all alone now..with Tons of Love for her in my heart ..
which is now, too heavy for me to carry solely..
and I was slowly dragged Down into Hell..
coz of My unbearable Love for Her..!!!
(as,For me dis world is nothing but Hell without her !!!)
-Pradeep..
"Love is a gift for some Lucky's..but can be a curse for the Odd's!!! "
im nt criticizing tlp bt hv doubts....first lo one side love laga "no" annav.Right from half the way both were in love annatlu our love annav...sorry if i hv interpreted it wrong....
ReplyDeleteThanks Bhanu! That was corect..i thought of refering love is between Us instead of My love towards her.! Please criticize and comment my writings in this way :). It'll help me improve.!
ReplyDeletehi tlp loved ur attitude to make writings more effective....ill be dng the same when ever i find handy time.....im always to glad to read these lines with feel
ReplyDelete@bhanu: thank u bhanu!!!
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