I'll say "I Love You!!!"
When I feel, U care for Me...
I'll say "I Love You!!!"
When I feel, I can share Anything n Everything vd U...
I'll say "I Love You!!!"
When I feel, U r the First person dat come to My mind..When I close My eyes n dream...
I'll say "I Love You!!!"
When My Heart Beat harder, when I see U or hear Ur voice...
I'll say "I Love You!!!"
When I feel dat, U r best thing dat had ever happened to Me...
I'll say "I Love You!!!
When I feel dat, if I cant say those 3 words to U...
I'd better Die!!!
..I Love You!!!
it looks so simple, but the thoughts hidden in it are deep...generally all failure love stories end up men`s fate to transform into a "poet", i dont know what happened to T L P; a beautiful potrayal of *love* !!!
ReplyDeletegood one tlp... ;)
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ReplyDeletebava nenu trin journy cheseanu monna andulo na mundu seat paina rasundi ela....
" 'stree' ane '1' aksharani chusi...
'prema' ane '2' aksharalani uhinchi...
'chaduvu' ane '3' aksharalanu marachi...
'jeevitam' ane '4' aksharalani nasam chesi...
'talli tandrulu' ane '5' aksharalanu bhadapetoddu... my dear frnds....." bacheppadu kada bava...ayite ani case lu ela avvalani ledu ayite ela kuda avachu ani hint ante...love kasta jagrataga chey bava...!!! andaru manchi vallu kadu ...andaru chedda vallu kadu...!!!
keep rockin n feel ba undi bava...nice expresion..!
ReplyDelete@Lokesh: superb ga cheppadra evado kani!!!
ReplyDeleteN Nenu Love lo lenu bava.. Im jus dreaming n putting it on paper anthe... :) Thanks Bava!!
@Rajendra: Thank u dude :)
Super......
ReplyDeleteLast line was the killer.....hats off mate
@Atul: Thank u dude! :)
ReplyDeleteFrns please spread abt this blog.. i need some serious critics!
feel was carried....bt i dont belive u r writing out of ur dreams..there is some one who is dng this atleast in dreams
ReplyDelete@bhanu: haha..seriously i dont have one! That is the reason, i was still a happy man dude ;). I had lot of crushes, so there are enough memories for me to write these.. :)
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