She comes in My Dreams..
She brings Happiness to Me..
as She smiles at Me..beautifully..
She looks like an Angel..
who lives in Stars n On Moon..
I cannot see her..But I can feel her..
and I Love Her!!!
Everytime, when She comes towards Me..
n I'll open my eyes in anxiety to see her..
But, as it was a Dream..She disappears..
As and when I open my eyes..
:(
Ohh My Dream girl..
I'm coming..I'm coming for U..!!!
I'll find u.. and We'll live happily then after..!!!
;)
-Pradeep..
koncham language usage lo changes cheyi bavuntadi....i mean brings in that professional touch....2nd line happiness ..to me anavasaram...3rd line beautifully anavasaram ela navvina neku algae kana padathadi kada etc.....sorry if i have behaved as a teacher correcting assignments.....
ReplyDeleteI need those corrections, as i overlook them..coz i wrote them feeling that the meaning will carry in the right way..
ReplyDeletePlz continue the same way..i'll modify it..